Behind the Scenes of a Deep Dive Manuscript Evaluation

Your Next Draft

Nov 14 2023 • 28 mins

The 7 layers of analysis I use to edit a fourth draft of a novel.

I don’t know about you, but right now, my schedule is full. My days are packed with editing. I have several manuscripts I’m absolutely loving on my desk right now, so many pages to read, and so many notes to share with writers.

With all this editing, I didn’t have time to put together a typical episode of Your Next Draft for you. So . . . I’m doing something a little different today.

I’ve decided to pull back the curtain on the editing I’m doing right now, this week, on the manuscript I’m currently reading.

In this episode, you’ll get a glimpse of how I think about a manuscript as I edit it. You’ll see:

  • The 7 (yes, 7!) levels of analysis I’m applying as I read
  • The stage of the editing process this manuscript is in
  • How I know what levels of editing are right for this manuscript at this stage
  • The things I’m not editing in this manuscript right now
  • That I really, really, really love editing (so much that I peaked on the mic a few times as I recorded. Sorry!)
  • And more!

If you’ve ever wondered what a developmental editor is thinking when they’re editing a novel . . .

. . . well, this is it. These are my thoughts, almost in-the-moment, as I edit a manuscript I’m loving.

Huge shoutout to author J. D. Edwin, whose manuscript this episode is about, and who gave me the all clear to share a glimpse at our process together. She’ll be delighted if you check out her books at jdedwin.com.

They’re really good books. (Yes, I’m a bit biased, because I edited them. But still. They’re really good.)

Links mentioned in the episode:

Send me a Text Message!

Support the Show.

Want more editing tips and resources? Follow me on Instagram and Facebook.

And if you're enjoying the podcast, would you mind leaving a rating and review on Apple Podcasts? That helps more writers find these editing resources. And it helps me know what's helpful to you so I can create more episodes you'll love!

Loving the show? Show your support with a monthly contribution »

You Might Like

The Moth
The Moth
The Moth
Snap Judgment
Snap Judgment
Snap Judgment and PRX
Myths and Legends
Myths and Legends
Jason Weiser, Carissa Weiser, Nextpod
99% Invisible
99% Invisible
Roman Mars
Selected Shorts
Selected Shorts
Symphony Space
The Great Detectives of Old Time Radio
The Great Detectives of Old Time Radio
Adam Graham Radio Detective Podcasts
LeVar Burton Reads
LeVar Burton Reads
LeVar Burton and Stitcher
Gastropod
Gastropod
Cynthia Graber and Nicola Twilley